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[Bomb Avoider]

Heres how to improve:

This is a decent avoider flash, but heres a simple way to make the game 10 times better:

Lag the pointer and the picture that is following it, so it doesn't move immediately to the pointer but instead slides across the screen to it. This will help avoid teleportation (by moving mouse off screen, and moving it back on screen on the other side.) Do you understand?

micky315 responds:

uhhhh I kinda dont understand.

[3 Games in 1]

Whatever Perriwinkle wants to say.

Now, i can't give you the credit for originality. There are a handful of other "three in one" games. The avoider was hard to control. The red dots moved twice my speed. The zombie game lagged extremely and could be beaten by spam clicking the spacebar. And the maze game was just annoying, There was no challenge whatsoever.

Instead of making two or three games in one, make one great game. You could take any of those three and improve on them.

Zombie game: add levels, add weaponry, try to reduce lag, etc
Avoider: Smooth out controls and make it quicker.
Maze: I hate maze games so i really don't know.

Good job though. 4/5

FlukeDude responds:

Thanks, normally I do concentrate on 1 game however I had 3 games I made for fun and they weren't good enough by themselves.

[Bubble Abroad]

Whatever Perriwinkle wants to say.

Well this is a lot like ball revamped and ball revamped 2, but there are a few definite differences. First off, i enjoyed the light blue coloring, the softness of gravity, and slightly easier to handle controls. Good job.

125Maniac responds:

Cheeers!